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I am sitting here now
after endless years of think.
And it still makes no sence,
why am I here and link

breathe on breathe?
Why dont we leave,
this deadly pain?
I just wanna gain

the sence of the world.
I fell so dead.
My life is nothing worth.
I feel so bad.

There is noone here,
who loves me real.
I won´t survive
next minute of live

Am i crazy? am I mad?
Should i life, or suicid
My lifewill is so low
I only wanna know:

The sence of my live
I feel so weird
Why dont I push a knive
into my heart?

Off the Window,
I am jumping out.
You dont hear me
I dont shout.

-mo93-
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Author's Comments

I am not a good poet, I know. But i think, this is because this is my first poem. This shows a bit my soul, what i am thinking about. You may think, I am crazy, but i am not lying. I often think a bit about this theme

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:iconmasterstryke:
von wegen crap, das is gut :orctop:
ziemlich gut sogar

ich glaub ich muss auch mal n paar gedichte von mir uploaden

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{[Misery, filth, disease – all things
that bring suffering to the world – only make
Phyrexians more dangerous]
:iconlord-archimonde:
findest du das wirklich gut? Also ich finds nicht so gut ;). Aber wenn du meinst, dann glaube ich dir mal. Ich persönlich hab eigentlich wenig Ahnung von Lyrik/prosa/poetik etc.

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:iconmasterstryke:
is ja eigendlich egal, muss man nicht unbedingt haben^^

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{[Misery, filth, disease – all things
that bring suffering to the world – only make
Phyrexians more dangerous]
:iconlord-archimonde:
Nicht umbedingt. Aber schön wäre es schon^^

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:iconmasterstryke:
joa schon^^

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{[Misery, filth, disease – all things
that bring suffering to the world – only make
Phyrexians more dangerous]
:iconlegolaa:
Man, beschreibt richtig gut meine Stimmung derzeit...

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Everything I write I mean it the way I write...
Everything you see Has got a deeper sence...
:iconlord-archimonde:
Warum denn?

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:iconlegolaa:
Ka, weil ich grad ziemlich melancholisch bin und das es in etwa ziemlich gut trifft

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Everything I write I mean it the way I write...
Everything you see Has got a deeper sence...
:iconlord-archimonde:
Ich finds immer blöd, wenn ich melancholisch bin. Außer ich bin gerade dabei, ein Gedicht zu schreiben. Fließt dann einfach viel besser.

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